Agreed
Its not missing any part of the song... but i think you should of added other instruments in... maybe made the beat a little louder... Other then that it was good, i think this would of went over the top with some vocals and possibly some other instruments. Don't be afraid to try something new once in a while it might turn out good =]
~§in§
P.S. Do me a favor and check out my lastest submission
§-Time is of the Essence-§(D)
Worked hard on it and someone thought it would be funny to flame it... Maybe its good or maybe he wasnt a flamer and really thought it was bad... Lemme know =]